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Hello, A

 

I was really worried.

I heard that there was a big earthquake and tsunami in Indonesia.

I'm glad there's no damage to the island where you live.

I'm really glad to say something comforting.

 

I am also studying for my upcoming exam.

I really want you to pass the promotion test.

I will send you some good pictures other than the opening photos of the Olympic Games.

 

Have a good time.

 

B

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Hello, A
How are you? 
At first, I was worried about your safety as heard that there was a earthquake and tsunami in Indonesia.
However, I am very happy that you and your neighborhood are sound and safe.

I am now studying for a promotion exam, and I hope I pass the text.
I would like to send you some pictures of Olympics¡¯ opening ceremony, and I hope you enjoy them.
Have a great week and keep in touch.
Warm regards,

B
     
       
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Hello A  ->  Dear A

I will send you some good pictures other than the opening photos of the Olympic Games
-> I will send you some terrific extra photos with the opening celemony photos of olympic games.

Have a good time.  ->  Have a nice day.

B  -> Warm regards,
        B
     
       
rankÁÖ¼± 2018-10-02 (È­) 05:31
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