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I had worked in food factory. Now I study social worker and ends at the end of June next year.
I will work as social worker for 2 years. and then I will run my welfare facilities.
I don't be skilled in English yet and so I should be hard to talking with you.
If I'm getting better and better in English, I think we're getting to know each other
I'm sorry for late reply.

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