[장르소설 리뷰] 너의 스탯이 보여 1부 - 아차니 [2.0]
선출 출신의 스카우터 아버지가 남겨주신 수첩에서
어느날 빛이 난다.
선수들의 이름을 적으면 육성방향과 스탯이 수첩에서 보이기 시작한다.
만년 꼴지의 하위팀을 리빌딩하여 최고가 되자.
- 뭐 이런 내용.
<iframe id="aswift_2" name="aswift_2" sandbox="allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-top-navigation-by-user-activation" width="740" height="0" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" allowtransparency="true" scrolling="no" src="https://googleads.g.doubleclick.net/pagead/ads?client=ca-pub-9025464498517089&output=html&h=185&slotname=2789408152&adk=3051769249&adf=2546462267&pi=t.ma~as.2789408152&w=740&fwrn=4&lmt=1672917622&rafmt=11&format=740x185&url=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2F101&host=ca-host-pub-9691043933427338&wgl=1&uach=WyJXaW5kb3dzIiwiMTAuMC4wIiwieDg2IiwiIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiLFtdLGZhbHNlLG51bGwsIjY0IixbWyJOb3Q_QV9CcmFuZCIsIjguMC4wLjAiXSxbIkNocm9taXVtIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiXSxbIkdvb2dsZSBDaHJvbWUiLCIxMDguMC41MzU5LjEyNSJdXSxmYWxzZV0.&dt=1672917622432&bpp=8&bdt=511&idt=505&shv=r20230103&mjsv=m202212070101&ptt=9&saldr=aa&abxe=1&cookie=ID%3D094cb0871081c892-22c7a96acad40073%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1656258135%3AS%3DALNI_MYcQ5KSrEcBT4jrneLK48zBraETPw&gpic=UID%3D000006fc69e47dca%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1672917591%3AS%3DALNI_MYtwdoeul6wkX87sEV3wPQ4IbSShw&prev_fmts=0x0%2C740x280&nras=1&correlator=1059626376965&frm=20&pv=1&ga_vid=1372606981.1656258137&ga_sid=1672917623&ga_hid=854443851&ga_fc=1&rplot=4&u_tz=540&u_his=1&u_h=1080&u_w=1920&u_ah=1040&u_aw=1920&u_cd=24&u_sd=1&dmc=8&adx=752&ady=1793&biw=1903&bih=937&scr_x=0&scr_y=0&eid=44759876%2C44759927%2C44759837%2C44778780%2C31071251%2C44780792&oid=2&pvsid=1464218375202835&tmod=355530266&uas=3&nvt=1&ref=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2Fmanage%2Fposts%3Fcategory%3D992405%26page%3D13%26searchKeyword%3D%26searchType%3Dtitle%26visibility%3Dall&eae=0&fc=1920&brdim=0%2C0%2C0%2C0%2C1920%2C0%2C1920%2C1040%2C1920%2C937&vis=1&rsz=o%7C%7CeEbr%7C&abl=CS&pfx=0&fu=128&bc=31&ifi=3&uci=a!3&btvi=1&fsb=1&xpc=lksYBzGB5h&p=https%3A//jangpal08.tistory.com&dtd=523" data-google-container-id="a!3" data-ruffle-polyfilled="" data-google-query-id="CPmsruSnsPwCFXfPTAIdm30MQA" data-load-complete="true" style="max-width: 100%; left: 0px; position: absolute; top: 0px; border-width: 0px; border-style: initial; width: 740px; height: 0px;"></iframe>
1. 주인공: 뭔가 있긴한데...
- 설정상 강력한 아이템이긴 한데...
- 그런거 치고는 활용도?가 떨어지는 듯 하며,
- 결국 인물들이 다 알아서 성장하는 기분이다.
- 한마디 한마디 툭툭 던지면 알아서 성장한다?
- 그럼 원래 재능이 있다는 말인데 작중에서는 오로지 수첩덕이라고 하니
- 미묘하게 언발란스 느낌이다.
2. 조연: 줏으면 천재.
- 재활용도 천재만.
- 묻어 놓고 시간 지나서 돌아오면 대박.
- 글의 양 치고는 캐릭터 활용이 아쉽다.
스카우터 이야기인데 주연은 수첩이고
그렇다면 수첩을 통해 키우냐 또 그건 아니고
그러다 보니 애매해진다.
<iframe id="aswift_3" name="aswift_3" sandbox="allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-top-navigation-by-user-activation" width="740" height="0" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" allowtransparency="true" scrolling="no" src="https://googleads.g.doubleclick.net/pagead/ads?client=ca-pub-9025464498517089&output=html&h=185&slotname=2789408152&adk=3051769249&adf=2888379042&pi=t.ma~as.2789408152&w=740&fwrn=4&lmt=1672917622&rafmt=11&format=740x185&url=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2F101&host=ca-host-pub-9691043933427338&wgl=1&uach=WyJXaW5kb3dzIiwiMTAuMC4wIiwieDg2IiwiIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiLFtdLGZhbHNlLG51bGwsIjY0IixbWyJOb3Q_QV9CcmFuZCIsIjguMC4wLjAiXSxbIkNocm9taXVtIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiXSxbIkdvb2dsZSBDaHJvbWUiLCIxMDguMC41MzU5LjEyNSJdXSxmYWxzZV0.&dt=1672917622493&bpp=1&bdt=572&idt=499&shv=r20230103&mjsv=m202212070101&ptt=9&saldr=aa&abxe=1&cookie=ID%3D094cb0871081c892-22c7a96acad40073%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1656258135%3AS%3DALNI_MYcQ5KSrEcBT4jrneLK48zBraETPw&gpic=UID%3D000006fc69e47dca%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1672917591%3AS%3DALNI_MYtwdoeul6wkX87sEV3wPQ4IbSShw&prev_fmts=0x0%2C740x280%2C740x185&nras=1&correlator=1059626376965&frm=20&pv=1&ga_vid=1372606981.1656258137&ga_sid=1672917623&ga_hid=854443851&ga_fc=1&rplot=4&u_tz=540&u_his=1&u_h=1080&u_w=1920&u_ah=1040&u_aw=1920&u_cd=24&u_sd=1&dmc=8&adx=752&ady=2548&biw=1903&bih=937&scr_x=0&scr_y=0&eid=44759876%2C44759927%2C44759837%2C44778780%2C31071251%2C44780792&oid=2&pvsid=1464218375202835&tmod=355530266&uas=3&nvt=1&ref=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2Fmanage%2Fposts%3Fcategory%3D992405%26page%3D13%26searchKeyword%3D%26searchType%3Dtitle%26visibility%3Dall&eae=0&fc=1920&brdim=0%2C0%2C0%2C0%2C1920%2C0%2C1920%2C1040%2C1920%2C937&vis=1&rsz=o%7C%7CeEbr%7C&abl=CS&pfx=0&fu=128&bc=31&ifi=4&uci=a!4&btvi=2&fsb=1&xpc=R4gDi0YQAQ&p=https%3A//jangpal08.tistory.com&dtd=507" data-google-container-id="a!4" data-ruffle-polyfilled="" data-google-query-id="CJPJseSnsPwCFQVKYAod6KsLxg" data-load-complete="true" style="max-width: 100%; left: 0px; position: absolute; top: 0px; border-width: 0px; border-style: initial; width: 740px; height: 0px;"></iframe>
작중에서는 주인공만 우쭈쭈 해주면서
대단한 능력자인양 표현하는데
딱히 그런 상황에 공감이 가지 않는게 아쉬운 부분이다.
어떤 기물에서의 기연이 있는 능력이든
아니면 본신의 재능이든 뭐가 두드러지며 이끌어나가든지 해서
매력이 커지는 것이 더 좋지 않았을까.
다들 방목하며 한마디 하고 나면
몇 달 뒤 능력이 올라서 이게 다 주인공 덕분입니다 하는데
연극 보는 기분이다.
그럼에도 꾸역꾸역 다 볼 수 있었던 건
앞뒤 맥락은 있다는 것과
이야기가 진행됨에 거슬림이 없다는건데
이상하게 얘기가 안끝난다 싶었더니 1부.
이럴 줄 알았으면 안 봤지.
괜히 밥 먹다 강제로 끊긴 기분이다.
보던 맥락이 있으니 이어졌으면 계속 읽었겠지만
딱히 2부 기다려 보지는 않을 듯.
<iframe id="aswift_7" name="aswift_7" sandbox="allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-top-navigation-by-user-activation" width="740" height="0" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" allowtransparency="true" scrolling="no" src="https://googleads.g.doubleclick.net/pagead/ads?client=ca-pub-9025464498517089&output=html&h=280&adk=391683355&adf=670562186&pi=t.aa~a.1009487541~i.30~rp.4&w=740&fwrn=4&fwrnh=100&lmt=1672917623&num_ads=1&rafmt=1&armr=3&sem=mc&pwprc=6645395835&ad_type=text_image&format=740x280&url=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2F101&host=ca-host-pub-9691043933427338&fwr=0&pra=3&rh=185&rw=740&rpe=1&resp_fmts=3&wgl=1&fa=27&uach=WyJXaW5kb3dzIiwiMTAuMC4wIiwieDg2IiwiIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiLFtdLGZhbHNlLG51bGwsIjY0IixbWyJOb3Q_QV9CcmFuZCIsIjguMC4wLjAiXSxbIkNocm9taXVtIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiXSxbIkdvb2dsZSBDaHJvbWUiLCIxMDguMC41MzU5LjEyNSJdXSxmYWxzZV0.&dt=1672917623948&bpp=1&bdt=2027&idt=1&shv=r20230103&mjsv=m202212070101&ptt=9&saldr=aa&abxe=1&cookie=ID%3D094cb0871081c892-22c7a96acad40073%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1656258135%3AS%3DALNI_MYcQ5KSrEcBT4jrneLK48zBraETPw&gpic=UID%3D000006fc69e47dca%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1672917591%3AS%3DALNI_MYtwdoeul6wkX87sEV3wPQ4IbSShw&prev_fmts=0x0%2C740x280%2C740x185%2C740x185%2C740x185%2C230x600%2C740x280&nras=2&correlator=1059626376965&frm=20&pv=1&ga_vid=1372606981.1656258137&ga_sid=1672917623&ga_hid=854443851&ga_fc=1&u_tz=540&u_his=1&u_h=1080&u_w=1920&u_ah=1040&u_aw=1920&u_cd=24&u_sd=1&dmc=8&adx=752&ady=3023&biw=1903&bih=937&scr_x=0&scr_y=0&eid=44759876%2C44759927%2C44759837%2C44778780%2C31071251%2C44780792&oid=2&pvsid=1464218375202835&tmod=355530266&uas=3&nvt=1&ref=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2Fmanage%2Fposts%3Fcategory%3D992405%26page%3D13%26searchKeyword%3D%26searchType%3Dtitle%26visibility%3Dall&eae=0&fc=1408&brdim=0%2C0%2C0%2C0%2C1920%2C0%2C1920%2C1040%2C1920%2C937&vis=1&rsz=%7C%7Cs%7C&abl=NS&fu=128&bc=31&ifi=8&uci=a!8&btvi=5&fsb=1&xpc=6495dIlyPD&p=https%3A//jangpal08.tistory.com&dtd=8" data-ruffle-polyfilled="" data-google-container-id="a!8" data-google-query-id="CIH56uSnsPwCFQFJYAod5ikHcQ" data-load-complete="true" style="margin: 0px auto; max-width: 100%; left: 0px; position: absolute; top: 0px; border-width: 0px; border-style: initial; width: 740px; height: 0px;"></iframe>
<iframe id="aswift_4" name="aswift_4" sandbox="allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-top-navigation-by-user-activation" width="740" height="0" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" allowtransparency="true" scrolling="no" src="https://googleads.g.doubleclick.net/pagead/ads?client=ca-pub-9025464498517089&output=html&h=185&slotname=2789408152&adk=3051769249&adf=3041264680&pi=t.ma~as.2789408152&w=740&fwrn=4&lmt=1672917623&rafmt=11&format=740x185&url=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2F101&host=ca-host-pub-9691043933427338&wgl=1&uach=WyJXaW5kb3dzIiwiMTAuMC4wIiwieDg2IiwiIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiLFtdLGZhbHNlLG51bGwsIjY0IixbWyJOb3Q_QV9CcmFuZCIsIjguMC4wLjAiXSxbIkNocm9taXVtIiwiMTA4LjAuNTM1OS4xMjUiXSxbIkdvb2dsZSBDaHJvbWUiLCIxMDguMC41MzU5LjEyNSJdXSxmYWxzZV0.&dt=1672917622500&bpp=8&bdt=579&idt=536&shv=r20230103&mjsv=m202212070101&ptt=9&saldr=aa&abxe=1&cookie=ID%3D094cb0871081c892-22c7a96acad40073%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1656258135%3AS%3DALNI_MYcQ5KSrEcBT4jrneLK48zBraETPw&gpic=UID%3D000006fc69e47dca%3AT%3D1656258135%3ART%3D1672917591%3AS%3DALNI_MYtwdoeul6wkX87sEV3wPQ4IbSShw&prev_fmts=0x0%2C740x280%2C740x185%2C740x185&nras=1&correlator=1059626376965&frm=20&pv=1&ga_vid=1372606981.1656258137&ga_sid=1672917623&ga_hid=854443851&ga_fc=1&rplot=4&u_tz=540&u_his=1&u_h=1080&u_w=1920&u_ah=1040&u_aw=1920&u_cd=24&u_sd=1&dmc=8&adx=752&ady=3393&biw=1903&bih=937&scr_x=0&scr_y=0&eid=44759876%2C44759927%2C44759837%2C44778780%2C31071251%2C44780792&oid=2&pvsid=1464218375202835&tmod=355530266&uas=3&nvt=1&ref=https%3A%2F%2Fjangpal08.tistory.com%2Fmanage%2Fposts%3Fcategory%3D992405%26page%3D13%26searchKeyword%3D%26searchType%3Dtitle%26visibility%3Dall&eae=0&fc=1920&brdim=0%2C0%2C0%2C0%2C1920%2C0%2C1920%2C1040%2C1920%2C937&vis=1&rsz=o%7C%7CeEbr%7C&abl=CS&pfx=0&fu=128&bc=31&ifi=5&uci=a!5&btvi=3&fsb=1&xpc=dpbZpFXhHT&p=https%3A//jangpal08.tistory.com&dtd=546" data-google-container-id="a!5" data-ruffle-polyfilled="" data-google-query-id="COjRs-SnsPwCFVKEwgodfJQHCA" data-load-complete="true" style="max-width: 100%; left: 0px; position: absolute; top: 0px; border-width: 0px; border-style: initial; width: 740px; height: 0px;"></iframe>
[5.0] 스토리, 캐릭터, 주제, 필력의 완벽한 조합.
[4.0] 뭔가 아쉽지만 두 번, 세 번 즐길 수 있는 이야기.
- 타인에게 추천할 수 있는 기준.
[3.0] 좀 많이 아쉽지만 두 번은 못 읽겠다. 딱 한 번 먹기 좋은 패스트 푸드.
- 시간은 안 아깝다의 기준.
[2.0] 거의 대부분 읽다 포기. 지금 나에겐 읽기 힘든 소설.
- 스토리를 풀어나가는 방식이 나와 맞지 않던가, 새로운 이슈를 거듭할때
급격히 흥미가 떨어져 포기하게 되는 소설. 1%의 확률로 다시 읽기도 하지만 거의 포기하게됨.
[1.0] 읽기 싫음.
2.0 / 5,웹소설,리뷰,소설 추천,너의 스탯이 보여,완결 소설 추천,월운,스포츠물,장르소설 리뷰,
(시사)
정말 라인 팔아넘기면 보수간판 영원히 떨어지는 역사상 가장 큰 사건이 될꺼임.
(31)
도서 월간 추천 
